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You can now read the comic at feralfaith.com/ !
Concepts for Faith and Soo Yun:
Still hard at work on these! Here we have the titular Feral Faith's arrival on the scene. Soo Yun's design has been tweaked very slightly to be how I originally envisioned her. Remember to check out my Tumblr for other updates that won't be shown here! atomic-chinchilla.tumblr.com/t…
Feral Faith and all related characters © Adam Ferguson
Concepts for Faith and Soo Yun:
Still hard at work on these! Here we have the titular Feral Faith's arrival on the scene. Soo Yun's design has been tweaked very slightly to be how I originally envisioned her. Remember to check out my Tumblr for other updates that won't be shown here! atomic-chinchilla.tumblr.com/t…
Feral Faith and all related characters © Adam Ferguson
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Aaaaaaaaaw man, this is so Metal Gear Solid! XD Loving it!
Still, this is actually the page I have a problem with among the four you posted. In this one, I think the transition from page 3 to 4 is jarring. At the end of page 3, we have the Chronicle pals huddling up and all, but then in the next page the first panel is a close-up of Faith. It feels a bit weird for a change of scene.
If I were you, I would change the two first panels of page 4. First panel showing from afar Faith climbing the ship, so that the reader can take in the scenery and realize more fluidly that the action takes place somewhere else. Heck, you could draw the boat with the helicopter in the background and show Paul and Ed's silhouettes in a window to reveal everyone's position. Having a bigger first panel would help to show the whole scenery, I mean I don't think the Humpty Dumpty panel needs this much space so you could make some cuts.
Sorry if I sound very picky but really, this is the only problem I had with your comic so far, and since I want to support you, I want to throw some criticism in there. Good luck on the rest of the pages!